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[p4c-Maleficence [Short Mix] HQ]

Sounds Like Fire Power

Give firepower a listen by Wolfgang Klassen

p4c responds:

im guessing you mean wolfgang gartner. that song rocks!! thank you haha

[Emptyness feeling]

A few notes

Try making your own intro... I recognized VEC right away :P You'll be able to pack a lot more originality into your song with your own intro.

I think the pizz doesn't really suit the genre that much, it leaves an empty feeling, and considering it's the main lead, that's not generally a good thing. I recommend using a synth instead. Get a nice phat lead in there and instead of just playing short snappy notes, maybe hold a note and sidechain it with the kick.

The progression of the song was nice, as well as the beat (which was pretty solid I might add).

The bass was lacking a little bit of power though... Nothing a few layers and a little EQ can't fix though.

For two hours, I would say you're doing pretty good :) But take more time into fixing this up a bit :)

5/5 (just because I hate zero bombs)

kibitz3r responds:

:DDDDD

[-ganon95- SSBM BTT]

How stupid do you think we are?

"first time using a frikin midi file lol"

lol, this is like 9001'th time you used a midi file. All of your songs are midi rips...

2 stars for taking the time to drag a preset over.

ganon95 responds:

wow i think you must be pretty stupid.

this is the first time i ever used a midi file, true i used it a few more times after that on songs i couldn't find notes for elseware but there is no way i used it on EVERY song. original songs aren't midi and alot of them that sound like midi are me placing the notes myself.

if you think this was easy to make then try doing the same thing yourself, i used presets yes but i changed up how they sound

[In Need of Vocalist]

lol

4/3

[Tragic Hero (rebirth)]

Slayer = cheesy

Would be cool if you had live guitar.

ninjex15009 responds:

I cant play a real guitar, i understand the slayer a bit less than desired but i dont have the time or funds.

[Aero Supremecy]

keep trying

You'll get there. Synthesized guitars sound cheesy. And the kick drum is way too heavy, as you'd said.

I recommend you check out some tutorials on mixing, and understand the concept of sonic space.

ninjex15009 responds:

Just because its aero supremecy doesnt necessarily mean that the flight has to be faster than the speed of sound, but i'll get on those tutorials

[Just Hold On]

Holy shit, just updated to FL 9 and I heard this.

This isn't even worth reviewing, it was totally fricken-A!

I'm sorry. But instead of reviewing, I would just like to congratulate you on your success. You will be heard by millions!

[xKore - Chrono Cross]

Where's da bazz

Other than 2:20.

I'm sure it was the style of music, but still, I think it could've been much more p0w3rfu1 1f 17 had m0r33 b00m.

[~EnV~On Da Move!]

yaa

it is good mang

i hope my review hlesps u mang

Envy responds:

sweet i'll work on that

[~McE~ Angels Call]

good job

Your hats are too quiet.